Introductions Have Consequences.
A developmental assessment of your first chapter. We look at structure, pacing, character introductions, narrative logic, and whether the hook lands or drifts.
Upon purchase, you’ll receive instant access to the Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide outlining how to submit your chapter. For this service, your chapter may be submitted as a .docx or PDF file. This service includes an editorial letter only; no in-text markup is returned.
Maximum 5,000 words. Submissions exceeding 5,000 words may require an adjusted quote.
What’s included:
Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide - Instant Download
Structural feedback
Pacing analysis
Character introduction clarity
Stakes evaluation
Reader engagement analysis
A focused editorial letter (3-10 pages)
No line-by-line editing/rewriting
Timeline:
Because the first chapter isn’t just a beginning. It’s a decision.
Introductions Have Consequences.
A developmental assessment of your first chapter. We look at structure, pacing, character introductions, narrative logic, and whether the hook lands or drifts.
Upon purchase, you’ll receive instant access to the Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide outlining how to submit your chapter. For this service, your chapter may be submitted as a .docx or PDF file. This service includes an editorial letter only; no in-text markup is returned.
Maximum 5,000 words. Submissions exceeding 5,000 words may require an adjusted quote.
What’s included:
Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide - Instant Download
Structural feedback
Pacing analysis
Character introduction clarity
Stakes evaluation
Reader engagement analysis
A focused editorial letter (3-10 pages)
No line-by-line editing/rewriting
Timeline:
Because the first chapter isn’t just a beginning. It’s a decision.