Under Review — First Chapter Editing

$275.00

Introductions Have Consequences.

A developmental assessment of your first chapter. We look at structure, pacing, character introductions, narrative logic, and whether the hook lands or drifts.

Upon purchase, you’ll receive instant access to the Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide outlining how to submit your chapter. For this service, your chapter may be submitted as a .docx or PDF file. This service includes an editorial letter only; no in-text markup is returned.

Maximum 5,000 words. Submissions exceeding 5,000 words may require an adjusted quote.

What’s included:

  • Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide - Instant Download

  • Structural feedback

  • Pacing analysis

  • Character introduction clarity

  • Stakes evaluation

  • Reader engagement analysis

  • A focused editorial letter (3-10 pages)

  • No line-by-line editing/rewriting

Timeline:

  • Delivered within 7 business days of confirmed manuscript receipt.

Because the first chapter isn’t just a beginning. It’s a decision.

Introductions Have Consequences.

A developmental assessment of your first chapter. We look at structure, pacing, character introductions, narrative logic, and whether the hook lands or drifts.

Upon purchase, you’ll receive instant access to the Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide outlining how to submit your chapter. For this service, your chapter may be submitted as a .docx or PDF file. This service includes an editorial letter only; no in-text markup is returned.

Maximum 5,000 words. Submissions exceeding 5,000 words may require an adjusted quote.

What’s included:

  • Editorial Agreement & Submission Guide - Instant Download

  • Structural feedback

  • Pacing analysis

  • Character introduction clarity

  • Stakes evaluation

  • Reader engagement analysis

  • A focused editorial letter (3-10 pages)

  • No line-by-line editing/rewriting

Timeline:

  • Delivered within 7 business days of confirmed manuscript receipt.

Because the first chapter isn’t just a beginning. It’s a decision.

    1. Choose your editing service.

    2. Receive the submission guide instantly.

    3. Send your manuscript as instructed.

    4. Revisions delivered within the outlined timeline.

  • Manuscripts must be submitted within 14 days of purchase. Failure to submit within this window may require rebooking.

  • Upon purchase, you’ll receive a digital onboarding guide outlining:

    • The terms of service

    • Submission requirements

    • Formatting guidelines (For this service, your chapter may be submitted as a .docx or PDF file.)

    • Timeline expectations, and;

    • next steps.

    Clear process. No ambiguity.